Checked Outline Term Paper

     Assalamualaikum guys ! :) Today my class was started at Dewan Seri Peria that's neared with my college . Today we bring the laptop because it easy to Miss Zue check our outlining . 

     Today , Miss Zue just checked our outlining one by one . I and Farahani had done for term paper . However , we still not confident that our term paper was correct or not . 

     When Miss Zue checked my thesis statement , as usual it still had a mistake . We need to do correction . The mistake were we do not rephrasing and summarizing on quotation . We accept it ! 

     Then according our mistake , we also checked other friends outlining . Miss Zu also said if we did a wrong format our marks will (-5marks) . So , it means if 5 wrong (-25marks) . Ohh its too much right ? So , I need to do the term paper more better than before . 

     Before class dismissed , she also said that this outline must be passed up this week on Friday . That's all for today . Thank you :)

Check the introduction

     Assalamualaikum ! :) Today we continued the presentation about thesis statement . Today only 2 partner will present were Ita's group and Asnawi's group . When Asnawi's group presented their thesis statement , Miss Zue was very angry because their thesis statement was wrong . Miss Zue ask us "What mistake that you all can see on their thesis statement ?" We just silent because we dont know what the mistake in Asnawi's thesis statement . That's make Miss Zue more angry . Fuhh ! At last , Miss Zue who are the one that helped them to correct their thesis statement . 

     After done with presented about thesis statement , we proceed with the introduction . Miss Zue was checked our introduction one by one .  I feel so nervous because I scared if Miss Zue will rejected my introduction . Although my introduction was so long , but I still not confident with my introduction . So , I and Farahani prepared 2 others introduction with 2 hook which were statistics and rheotorical question . I hope Miss Zue will accepted it . Insyallah !

      Before the class dismissed , Miss Zue ask us to make an outlining . She said she want us to be independent to do the outlining without she need to correct it because she tired to correct our mistakes one by one . I think what she said is true. We are University students . So , we need to be more independent . She also give us the example as a reference . Hope we all can do it correctly . Insyaallah ! That's all for today . Thank you :D 

Thesis Statement was Accepted :)

      Assalamualaikum guys ! :) Today we had to continued our presentation about thesis statement . As what I saw , Miss Zue's mood was not really good . She getting angry when they see cause and effect group presentation . It make me feel so nervous and scared to present my thesis statement .

     However , today I feel so happy ! Why ? Jeng Jeng Jeng ! My thesis statement was accepted . Alhamdulillah ! :D

 

Three thesis statement that we prepared which were :

1)  Although the government authorized students to bring hand phone to school, there are strong claims that bringing hand phone to school will bring more negative result than positive ones .

2) However, hand phone has become one of the major addictions among secondary school students, although it can cause many social problems like take and share pornographic pictures or videos .

3) Due to the various negative impact and shortcomings they bring, bringing hand phone school are not allowed .

 

     The thesis statement that Miss Zu had been accepted was number 1 . After that we have to make an introduction . That's all for today ! Thank you :D