Replacement class(Compare & Contrast Essay)

Assalamualaikum :) 

      Today was our replacement class . Our class was started at CLL1 on 8.00 p.m. Miss Zue ask us to be punctual . However , we came late little bit at 8.05 p.m. Sorry Miss Zue ! >.< 

     Before started the class , Miss Zue ask us to give her the soft copy about second draft that had been commented by our friends and the original second draft . When Miss Zue was busy take the soft copy , I online Facebook . Hehehe :P  But tonight I'm not in the mood because I'm very very very miss my parents :'(

     OK Tonight we learn about how to write compare & contrast essay . The topic that Miss Zue gives to us was about the TV series 'Desprate Housewives' . Are you already watch this movie ? 

     Two characters that Miss Zue gives us were Bree Van De Kamp & Lynette Scavo . 

Bree Van De Kamp

 Lynette Scavo

     We have to find the similarity and differences about them . The similarity that we got was their status and the differences were the way they management their family and their attitude . Compare and contrast essay have two patterns which is pattern A and B . 

 

PATTERN A

 

INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH:

Introduction stating the thesis statement.

 

BODY PARAGRAPHS:

Differences A & B

Differences A & B

Similarity A & B

CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH:

Conclusion summarising the main ideas or restating the thesis statement.

PATTERN B

 

INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH:

Introduction stating the thesis statement.

 

BODY PARAGRAPHS:

Similarity & Differences about A

Similarity & Differences about B

 

CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH:

Conclusion summarising the main ideas or restating the thesis statement.

 

     We were divided into 5 groups . My members group were Piqa , Nina , Izani and Ana . Our group needed to write an essay according pattern A . We were divided the worked . I do the introduction , Piqa do the conclusion , Izani and Nina do the differences while Ana do the similarity about Bree Van De Kamp & Lynette Scavo . Miss Zue also ask us to put the intext citation and references in essay . I don't know how to started my introduction . 

     Thank God , Miss Zue was teaches me how to write the introduction . Thank you Miss Zue :* After we done write the essay , we were combined our essay with each others . Then , like usually we gives the soft copy to Miss Zue . 

     Before the class ended , Miss Zue told us what we will do on next week . She said she will told us about the date of speaking test . She also reminds us to update our blog , do commenting and practice the speaking in the group . Wish me luckkk ! Thank youuu  ^_____^