Check the introduction

     Assalamualaikum ! :) Today we continued the presentation about thesis statement . Today only 2 partner will present were Ita's group and Asnawi's group . When Asnawi's group presented their thesis statement , Miss Zue was very angry because their thesis statement was wrong . Miss Zue ask us "What mistake that you all can see on their thesis statement ?" We just silent because we dont know what the mistake in Asnawi's thesis statement . That's make Miss Zue more angry . Fuhh ! At last , Miss Zue who are the one that helped them to correct their thesis statement . 

     After done with presented about thesis statement , we proceed with the introduction . Miss Zue was checked our introduction one by one .  I feel so nervous because I scared if Miss Zue will rejected my introduction . Although my introduction was so long , but I still not confident with my introduction . So , I and Farahani prepared 2 others introduction with 2 hook which were statistics and rheotorical question . I hope Miss Zue will accepted it . Insyallah !

      Before the class dismissed , Miss Zue ask us to make an outlining . She said she want us to be independent to do the outlining without she need to correct it because she tired to correct our mistakes one by one . I think what she said is true. We are University students . So , we need to be more independent . She also give us the example as a reference . Hope we all can do it correctly . Insyaallah ! That's all for today . Thank you :D 

Thesis Statement was Accepted :)

      Assalamualaikum guys ! :) Today we had to continued our presentation about thesis statement . As what I saw , Miss Zue's mood was not really good . She getting angry when they see cause and effect group presentation . It make me feel so nervous and scared to present my thesis statement .

     However , today I feel so happy ! Why ? Jeng Jeng Jeng ! My thesis statement was accepted . Alhamdulillah ! :D

 

Three thesis statement that we prepared which were :

1)  Although the government authorized students to bring hand phone to school, there are strong claims that bringing hand phone to school will bring more negative result than positive ones .

2) However, hand phone has become one of the major addictions among secondary school students, although it can cause many social problems like take and share pornographic pictures or videos .

3) Due to the various negative impact and shortcomings they bring, bringing hand phone school are not allowed .

 

     The thesis statement that Miss Zu had been accepted was number 1 . After that we have to make an introduction . That's all for today ! Thank you :D

 

Class without Miss Zue

     Assalamualaikum guys ! Today our class at PTDI 1 . Today Miss Zue was not entered to class . However , we must came to class because Miss Zue said who did not came to class , our BEL311 will FAIL ! Ohh its scary right ? So , we need to came to the class and make a discussion about the thesis statement .

     My group discussion for Argumentative essay were Faiz Adha and Fikri , Atikah Kardi and Fatin , Nadiah Solihin and Nadia Zamri and also Sarah and Syafiqah Salleh . 

     As we know our mistake yesterday , my partner and I needed to repair our thesis statement to become more better and make Miss Zue satisfied to our thesis statement . Alhamdulillah its better than before . So , we just need to present at the next class .

     After that , we helped others thesis statement . We were changed our opinion with each others . Class ended at 6 p.m. That's all for today . Thank you ! :)