Presentation for Thesis Statement & Introduction

     Assalamualaikum guys ! :) Today we were going to present a thesis statement and introduction . I hate this part because its not easy to make Miss Zue satisfied with our presentation . Huh ! 

     Before start the presentation , as usual Miss Zue ask for a volunteer to present the thesis statement . The class being so silent . Then , syukur Alhamdulillah Fikri and Faiz Adha volunteer to present their thesis statement first . However , Miss Zue was complained about their thesis statement and she was rejected it . So pity ! I understand what their feeling . :( 

     After that , Miss Zue ask to Fikri and Faiz Adha to called a name to present . They called Salihin and Faiz . Their topics about corruption and their thesis statement was so long . It make me feel so nervous because my thesis statement was so short and simple . Although their thesis statement was so long , Miss Zue was rejected . She said she know that Salihin and Faiz was copied from their material or on other word is Plagiarism . However , Miss Zue said that their thesis statement was so good and they just need to change a little bit . So , their statement was been accepted . Congrats ! :)

     The next partner were Acap and Asnawi . But they still not done with their thesis statement . So , the next partner were Izani , Syafiqah Azmi and Hakimah . After they present , Miss Zue get angry because she know that they do plagiarism . So , their thesis statement was rejected . 

     The next partner who are so lucky were Atikah and Adibah because Miss Zue was accepted their thesis statement . Congrats to both of you ! :) Then , Bariah and Inayah presented and follow by Nina and Wawa . Both of them , their thesis statement also have been accepted . 

     Today my group was not presented . The presented was continued at the next class . Before the class ended , Miss Zue ask us that tomorrow she do not enter to class . However , Miss Zue ask us to have a class at the library to make the thesis statement . We have to find our own group , for those people that make an argumentative essays have to discuss the pattern to make an thesis statement . 

     That's all for today . Thank you ! :D

Introductory Paragraph

     Assalamualaikum guys ! :) Today , we learn about how to write the introductory paragraph . Miss Zue was explained to us how to make the introduction become more interesting for readers to read our introduction . As your information , the part of introductory paragraph should have :

• The hook - designed to grab attention of the readers immediately .

• The transition - moves the readers from the hook to the driving force of the essay .

• Thesis statement - main ideas of the whole paragraph

     When to write the introductory paragraph , we must follow this step to make sure our introduction are clear and interesting for readers to read . Besides that , there are seven type of hook that we can used to make an introduction which is :

• Personal example / observation

• Quotation

• Facts/ statistic

• Rhetorical question

• Current events 

• Contrast to the thesis statement

• Definition

     So , to make an introduction we must write the hook first and then the transition . After that , we must write the thesis statement . For your information , we also can put more than one hook to the introduction to catch the attention of our readers to read . I think it easy to do . Insyallah wish me luck . That's all for today . Thank youuu :D

Thesis statement for the outlining

     Assalamualaikum guys ! Today  Miss Zue teach us about how to write thesis statement for outlining . Miss Zue was explained to us how to identified and write the thesis statement . She was explained one by one based on type of essay . 

     My type of essay is argumentative essay . We must to pay attention during the lecture . Eventhough our type of essay were different , we still need to know other type of essay . This is because to make sure when during examination everyone can answer correctly because we don't know what type of essay will come out .

     For Argumentative essay , it have 3 pattern :

PATTERN 1 :

INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH :

Introduction stating the thesis statement.

 

BODY PARAGRAPH :

Pro 1 , with topic sentence

Pro 2 , with topic sentence

Pro 3 , with topic sentence

 

Con(s) , with topic sentence + Refutation(s)

CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH :

Conclusion summarising the main ideas or restating the thesis statement

 

PATTERN 2 :

INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH :

Introduction stating the thesis statement.

 

BODY PARAGRAPH :

Con(s) , with topic sentence + Refutation(s)  

Pro 1 , with topic sentence

Pro 2 , with topic sentence

Pro 3 , with topic sentence

 

CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH :

Conclusion summarising the main ideas or restating the thesis statement

 

PATTERN 3 :

INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH :

Introduction stating the thesis statement.

 

BODY PARAGRAPH :

Con 1 , with topic sentence + Refutation

Pro 1 , with topic sentence

 

Con 2 , with topic sentence + Refutation

Pro 2 , with topic sentence

 

Con 3 , with topic sentence + Refutation

Pro 3 , with topic sentence

CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH :

Conclusion summarising the main ideas or restating the thesis statement

     My group was choosen pattern 3 . Eventhough pattern 3 is more difficult rather than other pattern , we want try do the essay according pattern 3 . Insyallah we can do it ! :)

     Miss Zue want us to write a thesis statement only and we are going to present next week on tuesday because on Monday we don't have a class . Miss Zue are going to invigilate an examination for degree students . So, we have a lot of time to do the thesis statement . But , Miss Zue said, "more times means more pressure" . Hope we can do better and Miss Zue not reject our thesis statement . Wish me luck ! That's all for today . Thank youuuu ! :)